Incorporate review comments

Signed-off-by: Nicholas Curtis <nicurtis@amd.com>

src/docs/analysis.md

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ Connection Options:
 
 **omniperf import for vcopy:**
 ```shell-session
-$ omniperf database --import -H dummybox -u temp -t asw -w workloads/vcopy/mi200/
+$ omniperf database --import -H pavii1 -u temp -t asw -w workloads/vcopy/mi200/
 ROC Profiler:  /usr/bin/rocprof
  
 --------

src/docs/conf.py

@@ -54,7 +54,9 @@ def install(package):
 
 myst_heading_anchors = 2
 # enable replacement of (tm) & friends
-myst_enable_extensions = ["replacements"]
+myst_enable_extensions = [
+    "replacements"
+]
 
 # Add any paths that contain templates here, relative to this directory.
 templates_path = ["_templates"]

src/docs/high_level_design.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 The [Omniperf](https://github.com/AMDResearch/omniperf) Tool is architecturally composed of three major components, as shown in the following figure.
 
-- **Omniperf Profiling**: Acquire raw performance counters via application replay based on the [rocProfiler](https://rocm.docs.amd.com/projects/rocprofiler/en/latest/rocprof.html).  The counters are stored in a comma-seperated value, for further analyis. A set of MI200 specific micro benchmarks are also run to acquire the hierarchical roofline data. The roofline model is not available on earlier accelerators.
+- **Omniperf Profiling**: Acquire raw performance counters via application replay based on the [ROC Profiler](https://github.com/ROCm-Developer-Tools/rocprofiler).  The counters are stored in a comma-seperated value, for further analyis. A set of MI200 specific micro benchmarks are also run to acquire the hierarchical roofline data. The roofline model is not available on earlier accelerators.
 
 - **Omniperf Grafana Analyzer**: 
   - *Grafana database import*: All raw performance counters are imported into the backend MongoDB database for Grafana GUI analysis and visualization. Compatibility of previously generated data between Omniperf versions is not necessarily guarenteed.

src/docs/installation.md

@@ -172,9 +172,9 @@ $ sudo apt install ./mongodb-database-tools-ubuntu2004-x86_64-100.6.1.deb
 ```
 > Installation instructions for alternative distributions can be found [here](https://www.mongodb.com/download-center/database-tools/releases/archive)
 
-### 2) Persistent Storage
+### Persistent Storage
 
-The user will also bind MongoDB to a directory on the host OS to create a local backup in case of a crash or reset. In the Docker world, this is known as "creating a persistent volume":
+The user may also choose to bind MongoDB to a directory on the host OS to create a local backup in case of a crash or reset:
 
 ```bash
 $ sudo mkdir -p /usr/local/persist && cd /usr/local/persist/

src/docs/introduction.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
 ## Scope
 
-MI Performance Profiler ([Omniperf](https://github.com/AMDResearch/omniperf)) is a system performance profiling tool for Machine Learning/HPC workloads running on AMD Instinct (tm) Accelerators. It is currently built on top of the [rocProfiler](https://rocm.docs.amd.com/projects/rocprofiler/en/latest/rocprof.html) to monitor hardware performance counters. The Omniperf tool primarily targets accelerators in the MI100 and MI200 families. Development is in progress to support MI300 and Radeon (tm) RDNA (tm) GPUs.
+MI Performance Profiler ([Omniperf](https://github.com/AMDResearch/omniperf)) is a system performance profiling tool for Machine Learning/HPC workloads running on AMD Instinct (tm) Accelerators. It is currently built on top of the [ROC Profiler](https://github.com/ROCm-Developer-Tools/rocprofiler) to monitor hardware performance counters. The Omniperf tool primarily targets accelerators in the MI100 and MI200 families. Development is in progress to support MI300 and Radeon (tm) RDNA (tm) GPUs.
 
 ## Features
 

src/docs/profiling.md

@@ -328,9 +328,7 @@ ROCProfiler: input from "/tmp/rpl_data_230411_170300_29696/input0.xml"
 ```
 
 #### Dispatch Filtering
-Dispatch filtering is based on the *global* dispatch index of kernels in a run. 
-
-The following example profiles only the 0th dispatched kernel:
+The following example demonstrates profiling on selected dispatches:
 ```shell-session
 $ omniperf profile --name vcopy -d 0 -- ./vcopy 1048576 256
 Resolving rocprof