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 ![Sigstore](sigstore-logo_horizontal-color.svg)
 
-**Sigstore is an open source project for improving software supply chain security. The Sigstore framework and tooling empowers software developers and consumers to securely sign and verify software artifacts such as release files, container images, binaries, software bills of materials (SBOMs), and more. The signing materials are stored in a tamper-resistant public log so there’s no need to manage or store keys.**
+**Sigstore is an open source project for improving software supply chain security. The Sigstore framework and tooling empowers software developers and consumers to securely sign and verify software artifacts such as release files, container images, binaries, software bills of materials (SBOMs), and more. Signatures are generated with ephemeral signing keys so there's no need to manage keys. Signing events are recorded in a tamper-resistant public log so software developers can audit signing events.**
 
-The project is backed by the Open Source Security Foundation (OpenSSF) under the Linux Foundation, with contributions from Google, Red Hat, Chainguard, GitHub and Purdue University. It is 100% open source and free to use for all developers and software providers. The Sigstore community develops and maintains the source code and tooling as a public good, non-profit service to improve the open source software supply chain.
+The project is backed by the Open Source Security Foundation (OpenSSF) under the Linux Foundation, with contributions from Google, Red Hat, Chainguard, GitHub and Purdue University. It is 100% open source and free to use for all developers and software providers. The Sigstore community develops and maintains tools to simplify code signing and verification, and also operates a public-good, non-profit service to improve the open source software supply chain.
 
 ## Why cryptographic signing?
 
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 - **Verified**: By checking your identity with our certificate authority (Fulcio).
 - **Witnessed**: By recording the signing information in a permanent transparency log (Rekor).
 
-The signer can even forgo using long-lived keypairs. With “keyless” or “ephemeral key” signing, users verify the artifact using the transparency log for signature verification rather than keys. Sigstore improves on traditional methods of signing to be more convenient and secure:
+The signer ideally forgoes using long-lived keypairs. With “keyless” or “ephemeral key” signing, users verify the artifact using the transparency log for signature verification rather than keys. Sigstore improves on traditional methods of signing to be more convenient and secure:
 
 - **Convenience**: Users can take advantage of convenient tooling, easy container signing, and can even bypass the difficult problem of key management and rotation.
 - **Security**: With Sigstore, the artifact is not just signed; it’s signed, verified, and witnessed.