draft of clarity and concision pass on sections 2.1 through 2.5 #136
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pes10k
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I got rid of this example bc i think it doesn't seem to be demonstrating how persistent storage can be abused (it seems to be demonstrating how service workers can be abused, whether or not they persist across sessions
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Look, if you're going to expect me to spell everything correctly, we're going to be at this for a long time :P
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I think this should stay in a Note block.
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This is part of #107
I'm doing it in chunks to prevent horrible merge conflicts and to actually make progress
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